Writing Lesson #6 – Exaggeration

exaggeration

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Writing Lesson #6 education posters by The Napkin Dad

When my daughters were young they started a running joke with me.  It was because of my tendency to exaggerate in my story telling or explanations.  For example, I might be explaining something about sports and say, ‘Joe Blow was the GREATEST catcher who ever lived.’  or if I was talking about history I would say, ‘General YadaYada was the MOST brilliant war tactician ever!’  They started expecting my superlatives and would crack up or roll their eyes when they came.  My eldest, Rebekah, was adamant that I see the movie ‘The Big Fish’ when it came out because it was about a father who was a giant story teller, exaggerating the stories to absurd lengths.  Now, of course, I NEVER did that. But she thought it would be fun for me to see the movie anyway.. uh huh.

All that is pretty much in good fun – no harm, no foul.  There is value in clarifying and refining an experience in story telling so it has more power.  But going farther than that, as we have seen in recent years with reporters exaggerating events or authors exaggerating their memoirs, can lead to a real lack of trust and believability on the part of the audience, not to mention a career destruction.

So, crystalize it so it sparkles but don’t forget the story plainly told still needs to be able to grab the reader’s attention.  Move too far away from that in your story line and word crafting and you might lose the essence of what makes your story great in the first place.

Drawing and commentary by Marty Coleman of The Napkin Dad Daily

Quote by William Safire, 1929-2009, American writer, columnist and speechwriter

Writing Lesson #5

Is it a problem that I am interrupting ‘Problem Week’ to post something different?

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Writing Lesson #5 Poster by The Napkin Dad.  Perfect for the classroom!
I am not a great writer.  I get my grammar wrong, my sentence structure is sometimes caddywumpus and I definitely do not know proper punctuation.  But I do know metaphors and analogies pretty well and it’s one of my great pleasures in life to read, hear or come up with good ones.  But just as pleasurable is when I hear, read or come up with really bad ones. 

Why is it so great to hear something so bad? Because it’s as if the world suddenly became an absurdist Looney Tunes cartoon with funny looking people and fractured language right in front of my eyes.  I like things that make no sense whatsoever but still point to something that makes sense.

Most importantly, it makes me laugh and I like that.

 


Drawing and commentary by Marty Coleman of The Napkin Dad Daily

 

Quote is my variation on one by William Safire